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會考英語作文解析

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會考英語作文解析

會考英語作文全解析:親人朋友類

1、父愛如山!假設父親節即將來臨,請你藉此機會給你父親寫封信,和他談談心裏話。

寫作要點:

1)父親辛勤工作,讓我受到更好的教育,過上更好的生活;

2)父親在學習上對我嚴格要求;考試失利時,他鼓勵我不放棄;遇到困難時,父親鼓勵我笑對生活;表達對父親的感謝和祝福。

一、題目要點:

題目要求考生在父親節來臨之際表達對父親的愛和對父親的感謝。文章要求有兩個要點:第一是父親為了讓我接受更好的教育和享受更好的生活,工作很辛苦;第二是父親既對我嚴格要求又對我關心鼓勵。基於以上兩點在父親節來臨之際對父親的感謝和祝福。

二、寫作提綱:

為了寫好這篇作文,我們首先列出以下的提綱:

第一步:Tell your father that you know he works very hard.

第二步:Tell your father you know how much he loves you.

第三步:Thank your father and send your wishes to him.

三、語言組織:

用自己最真實的感情去組織語言,表達自己對父親的感謝和祝福。參考詞彙和句型:work hard, be strict with, encourage sb. to do , smile at life, healthy and happy forever, Thank you for…等等。組織語言的同時,要儘可能地用自己和父親間的真實經歷向大家展現父愛的偉大。

Dear father,

Fathers Day is coming. Id like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. Whenever I fail an exam, you encourage me to be confident and keep trying. When I have problems in life, you always tell me to be brave and keep smiling.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Fathers Day!

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear father,

I want to say something to you on the special day.

There is a lot of love around me, but I will never forget your love. You always help me when I meet difficulty. I remembered that at the beginning of Grade Nine, I was poor at physics. When you heard this, you had a talk with me. You encouraged me not to lose heart and also helped me with my lessons. You told me “Where there is a will, there is a way.” From then on, with your help, I became so interested in study that I made great progress. After that, I made much progress in physics.

Thank you for your love and your help. I will do my best to give all my love to others.

Yours,

Li Hua

2、你國外的朋友Jason想了解你們的英語老師,請根據下表提示用英語寫一篇題為“My English teacher Laura”的短文。

Laura

Appearance Nationality England

Age 29

Personality Kind---get along well with all the students

Strict---students well-behaved in class

Patient---deal with questions

Creative---teaching style is different from that of others

Evaluation(評價)

一、題目要點:1、個人基本情況(姓名:國籍:英國;年齡:29 2、人物性格:善良、嚴格、有耐心、有創造力;3、表現出這些性格特點的事例;4、你對她的評價。

二、寫作提綱:這篇書面表達的提綱即為上面的表格。

My English teacher Laura

Laura, my English teacher, is from England and is about 29 years old. She has blond hair and she always wears a pair of glasses on her nose.

She is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. Although she is strict, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. Whenever we have difficulty in English learning, she will help us to deal with the questions. We all like her lessons very much. Thats because she is very creative. Her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. She prepares he r lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. In class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.

In a word, I think she is one of the best English teachers I have ever seen. We all love and respect her.