經典英文自薦信點評

第一篇：經典的英文求職信點評

job application

may 22nd

dear mr. cavendish,

i saw your advertisement in the local paper this evening，and i wonder if you would consider me for a job as a waiter this summer.

i am seventeen years old and at present i am studying english and economics. when i leave school, i hope to take a course in hotel management. during the school holidays last summer, i worked as a waiter at the central hotel. the headwaiter there, mr. macintosh, will be pleased to send you a recommendation for me.

i would prefer to work in your hotel in filey because it is near my home. however, if there isn’t any job there for me, perhaps you could consider me for the scarborough hotel.

i would be pleased if you will send me information about the pay and conditions of the job to be offered. i will be free to begin work in the fourth week of july when the school holidays start.

yours sincerely,

peter tuck

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行文點評

這是一封範例的求職信。第一段開門見山，表明寫信的目標是求職。同時，也註明了消息起源和應聘職位。第二段開端介紹求職者的情況，(注意：所寫的情況最好能體現出你十分合適所應聘的職位)。信中第三段特別陳述了一個不情之請並闡明原因。最後一段表明自己盼望得到回覆，並闡明自己可以開端工作的具體時間。

這封信符合求職信的結構請求，語言簡潔，語氣禮貌慷慨。

好文妙譯

求職信

親愛的卡文迪斯先生：

我在今晚的處所報紙上看到了你們的廣告，我想在這個夏天做一份服務生的工作，敬請考慮。

我十七歲，現在正在學習英文和經濟學。畢業後，我盼望能夠學習酒店管理課程。去年暑假時，我在中央酒店作服務生。那兒的領班麥金託什先生會很樂意向您寄交一封關於我的推薦信。

我比較愛好在您的費雷酒店工作，因為那兒離我家不遠。但如果那兒沒有我的工作機會，也許您可以考慮讓我去斯卡伯勒酒店。

如果您能寄給我有關這份工作的薪水和工作環境的一些信息，我會非常高興。我可以從七月的第四個星期開端工作，那時學校開端放假了。　

彼得·塔克

5月22日

詞彙考慮

recommendation n.推薦，介紹

思如泉湧

will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success. 意志、工作和等候是成功的基石。

a good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者必善其終。

第二篇：經典英文自薦信

英文自薦信例文，僅供參考。

dear sir,

i wish to apply for the position of deputy editor advertised in dated 19 june, 2014.

i have had considerable editorial experience and am familiar with proofreading, rewriting, and productions, as well as the more creative aspects of this type of work. i should like to summarize briefly my experience:

1997-2014

for three years i was employed as senior editor on an xyz weekly magazine having a circulation of about 80,000. here i did a great deal of original writing, wrote the headlines, and worked directly with the printer in setting up the paper.

1997-1993

i also worked as assistant editor on a monthly newsletter in xxx, a voluntary organization, where my tasks were similar to those described above, but also included a great deal of interviewing and personal contact with people from all walks of life.

i was graduated from cde university in 1993 with honors, after three years of attendance in the evening session, while working full-time during the day. i majored in ommmunciation and am continuing my studies in this field at present at abc university, where i expect to receive my master's degree next summer.

i shall be able to call for an interview at your convenience, and shall be able to supply any necessary or examples of my previous work.

yours truly

haoword

第三篇：經典英文自薦信模板五篇

p.o. box 36 biit university beijing,china 100000

dear sir/madam:

are you searching for a telecommunications manager with expertise in project management and team leadership?

i specialize in creating and implementing high-performance strategies that directly impact growth and profitability of large telecommunications companies. in addition to my knowledge of business processes, i also offer proficiency in telecom software development and cutting-edge technologies.

i am relocating to shenzhen and would be interested in opportunities with your firm. currently, i serve as manager for bit company's information industry division. briefly, some of my accomplishments include:

developed a tool to track and forecast price,quantity,and revenue, which enables client to monitor business performance

implemented a customized end-to-end testing process and sql database

my business acumen, technical expertise, and leadership capabilities have contributed to a number of successful projects. the enclosed resume outlines my credentials and accomplishments in greater detail. i would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

sincerely,

gu bin

april 13,2014

p.o. box 36

tsinghua university

beijing,china 100084

dear sir/madam:

your advertisement for a network maintenance engineer in the april 10 student daily interested me bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job i am seeking.

according to the advertisement ,your position requires top university,bachelor or above in computer science or equivalent field and proficient in windows nt4.0 and linux system. i feel that i am competent to meet the requirements. i will be graduating from graduate school of tsinghua university this year with a m.s. degree . my studies have included courses in computer control and management and i designed a control simulation system developed with microsoft visual interdev and sql server.

during my education, i have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. not only have i passed cet-6, but more important i can communicate with others freely in english. my ability to write and speak english is out of question.

i would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.i would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

with many thanks,

wang lin

april 13,2014

room 212 building 343

tsinghua university,beijing 100084

ms. yang:

i was referred to you by mr. zhang, a partner with your beijing office, who informed me that the shanghai office of your company is actively seeking to hire quality individuals for your auditor program.

i have more than two years of accounting experience, including interning as an auditor last year with the beijing office of cccc. i will be receiving my mba this may from tsinghua university. i am confident that my combination of practical work experience and solid educational experience has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. i understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the field. my background and professional approach to business will provide your office with a highly productive auditor upon completion of your development program.

i will be in the shanghai area the week of april 16. please call me at 136001216901 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs. i look forward to meeting you then.

sincerely,

cheng dan

april 13,2014

p.o. box 36

biit university

beijing,china 100000

dear sir/madam:

now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person. this person must fit very specific criteria. usually, after all is said and done, the corporation wants a business person who can manage, create and communicate. a seasoned professional who‘s been around for a while.

if you‘ve been looking for this rare combination of business savvy and design expertise, my background might interest you:

ten years of working experience. solid background in the management of creative up-and-comers.

know new technologies that show instant profit, such as cad/cam.

this is but a brief summary of my abilities. and there is much, much more to share.i feel i have strong marketable skills in which you would be interested. please contact me if you would like to hear and see more.

with many thanks,

huang yan

第四篇：英文自薦信英文自薦信

dear school leadership:

hello!

thank you for your loyalty in his busy schedule written through my job.

west tian-ling my name is anyang teachers college department of music 2014 music graduates professional.

four years in college, after persistent efforts, i have a relatively solid expertise. rise to the challenge of music theory, sight-singing, listening, vocal music teaching such courses. however, since the view that the inexperienced, lack of practical experience, hope to be able to gradually improve their work and give full play to its strengths as a school pitch in to help tim. in addition, i have anyang tutor over a period of time, have a certain amount of teaching ability. through the exercise, i deeply understand that a person must have good morals and virtue, a strong sense of professionalism and responsibility in order to face the difficulties and challenges.

in order to realize the value of your life for themselves for a good environment to display their talent, i sincerely hope to join your school. i believe that through their own efforts, your school will soon be capable of teaching.知遇之恩,沒齒不忘, hoping you can give me a chance. if fortunate enough to become a member of your school, and i will cherish this hard-won opportunity for all teaching staff and schools together, solidarity, with the wisdom and sweat to create a better future school!

enclose my cv and contact details, sincerely look forward to the chance for an interview!

i wish you good health and good luck!

第五篇：英文自薦信英文自薦信

dear sir / ms:

hello! i wish to apply for your company in the newspapers to seek medical representative. i am confident that fits your business requirements.

in july of this year, i graduated from beijing medical college. the profession of clinical studies. through 3 years in school, master the basic medical knowledge, and has participated in a variety of practical activities in school organization.

i am a studious person, in college, has been awarded the scholarship, i also served as a member of publicity, with strong organizational and coordination capacity. i am a cheerful, enthusiastic person with strong communication skills. i firmly believe that: dedication and sense of responsibility to enable me to face any difficulties and challenges team.

today's healthcare industry is booming, i would like to join for china's medical cause and the development of your company to make its own contribution.

attached to the letter to my cv. if the opportunity to interview with you, i would be very grateful.

sincerely

salute